My absolute favorite genre to read is Mystery. I was nervous to write one, but a flash flood in a creepy, Texas oak forest on a muggy October day was enough to inspire me. Of course, my protags are theatre kids. And yes, the title is a pun on musical song lyrics.
YA Mystery
Word Count 85K
Samantha Major is waiting for her big break—even if it’s just a small part in her school’s production of The Sound of Music. At sixteen (“. . . going on seventeen”) she just got her license, and if she can prove she’s responsible by keeping tabs on her annoying ten-year-old brother Elijah, her parents might even help her buy a car.
But Elijah’s not as easy to babysit as the Von Trapp children. In fact, he calls Sam home from auditions early, claiming he found a dead man in the woods behind their house. Finding nothing, the police and her parents dismiss Elijah’s story as a cry for attention.
But when a local teen, Jake Summers, shows up on the news the next day as the latest murder victim of a drug cartel, Sam knows there’s more to Elijah’s story than meets the eye. Jake was with Sam in those woods four years earlier—the same night she had a haunting, near-death experience.
With the help of her theater friends, Sam seeks the truth, pushing past her chilling memories of the night four years ago to look at facts. But when evidence disappears from her locker at school, an intruder sneaks into her house overnight, and her prime suspect ends up in the hospital after being assaulted, Sam realizes—too late—that she’s in over her head. If she can’t catch the killer, Elijah’s may be the next dead body in the woods.
MISCELLANEOUS INFORMATION ABOUT THIS TITLE
Raindrops on Roses and Whispers of Kingpins is a stand-alone novel intended as the first title in a mystery series.
In high school I played the Mother Abbess in the school's rendition of The Sound of Music. The director had nun costumes made for about a dozen of us, and they were spectacular. I got to keep mine after the play was over and my mom wore it to a Halloween party. She won the costume contest.
I always wondered what it would be like to walk around town in that nun habit. There's a sense of anonymity with the veil and wimple covering your head. It almost makes you invisible. What mischief could a couple of girls get up to in nun costumes if they were poking around for information?
I knew immediately that this book would have a scene where the nun costumes would play a key role in solving the crime.
I also knew that the creepy greenbelt would become a character unto itself. The local legend of "La Llorona" plays heavily into the spooky vibes. While I made the decision not to pull the supernatural into this story, you may be left wondering just what is real and what is perceived. There's a hint of unreliable narrator to this one.
I am absolutely prepared to build out this mystery series with multiple punny titles, all based on musicals. The diverse cast of characters has so many possibilities for fun, growth, and arcs.
To see this manuscript, please contact Cathie Hedrick-Armstrong at Marsal Lyon Literary Agency.
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